School of Rejects

A real girl in a fictional world

Sore Ch16p3

posted 27th Jun 2020, 8:27 PM

Sore Ch16p3
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27th Jun 2020, 8:27 PM


5/31/16: I may have referred to the chef as "Spaz" before, but that was before I found out that it's a very negative word in Britain. I don't want any association with that, so I changed it up a bit. I only picked the name originally b/c it was similar to "spaghetti". "Paaz" is close to the childish pronunciation "pazgetti", so hey, why not.

Paaz is another char I forgot to put in the character list, even though he's minor. I should update the page, given how different Lethe looks now. Paaz really is Harue's "kid" from her story-there's a reason why he was shown back in Chapter 4 as a member of the group that first found SoRe, b/c Harue was there too. Ostra, as well, since that is when she left Pearl and her mom. See the link below.

I really wanted to show Harue interacting with Paaz more, and make Lethe wonder just what kind of relationship they had, but I kept forgetting/not being able to squeeze it in. Next storyline page probably won't be up until June 10th, I'm not quite sure if I want to take the turn I originally planned yet.

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