School of Rejects

A real girl in a fictional world

Sore C15p14

posted 26th Jun 2020, 11:50 PM

Sore C15p14
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26th Jun 2020, 11:50 PM

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4/13/16: How did everyone fall asleep when Rob and Kaze weren't sleepy at all? We'll find out next page (probably).

A little anxious about this one. I originally had Lethe whispering to herself, but I wanted this to be a "quiet" moment so all but the last word are omitted. I wanted to leave it vague as to what exactly she's thinking, but obvious enough that you'd get the general idea. A bit of a shift from the rest of the chapter, but this was a good moment to stir things up again. Also, I can't tell you how hard it was to resist the urge to shoujou-fy this moment more, like having Rob whisper something in his sleep, react to Lethe's touch, or have Lethe try to leave the room in embarrassment. Instead, have a nice (but not stellar) sunrise.

Why doesn't Kaze's room have curtains? Uh.... he doesn't spend too much time in his room. Even while studying he'd probably prefer to be outdoors. And when he is inside, he'd want to be able to look outside.

Just go with it. >_>

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