School of Rejects

A real girl in a fictional world

Sore C13p7

posted 22nd Jun 2020, 9:01 PM

Sore C13p7
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22nd Jun 2020, 9:01 PM

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11/11/14: I wanted to have Lethe actively search for Rob this time. I didn't show what she was doing before she got injured, so I figured they talked earlier, Rob mentioned he would be painting at the nearby lake later, and Lethe hoped he would still be there. This is the same lake in the background of chapter 9, pg 19 & 20.

I was going to show a good half page of Lethe waiting for the portal and progressively freaking out, but it didn't move the story fast enough.

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